sounds of istana

This piece is written for a small wind band.I was insipire by fanfares and tuba concerto.This is my first movement inwhich i have not completed the dynamics.I am working on my second movement which would be out soon.

Emmm... well, the writing... (orchestration and chord progressions) are not.... bad. I really could not make out a theme. It seemed really random, mainly because the piece is so short. If this is part of a multimovement piece, I don't see how you can get away with writing such a short first movement. So.. please expand on what you have, so that the listener can get a good grip on the piece. Thanks.