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Old Apr 13 2008, 6:51 PM

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Temptation trance - FL7

This is a trance song composed by me on fruity loops studio 7
I really hope you like it ...
pls reply ..

YouTube - Temptation - Fruity Loops
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Old Apr 16 2008, 11:55 PM

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* You need to not put reverb on the kick drum. It will make it sound tighter and punchier, and make it cut through the mix better. This applies to all of the other drums as well, but the kick drum most of all.
* I feel that the stereo image is a bit unbalanced; try panning things more subtly. Perhaps this is only an issue listening through headphones, though.
* The bassline should be louder. No reverb on this one, either. I can't tell whether you used any, so I apologize if you didn't, but I thought it seemed worth mentioning.

These mix issues aside, this is a really nice-sounding piece of music. Just make these minor corrections, and it will sound wonderful; real heavy and danceable.
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