thoughts of a string

I would like your opinion on this melody before i go on with the composition!!

thank you!!

i am sory for posting this so many times but there was somthing wrong with my computer and the internet connection! i am trying to remove them but i can not find out how. can anyone help me??

Hi Kartapanis, the other topics you posted by mistake have been removed.

Your melody looks good. The phrasing is mostly coherant, although if you are going for 4 bar phrases then there are some points at which your phrasing is off, like when the phrase ends at bar 16 and the next phrase appears to only be 3 bars long (bars 17-19).

As well as this, the pitches you use seem a little static. You should vary the pitches more, employing both leaps and next door notes.

I'd be interested to hear what you do with this melody in the full composition, don't forget to post it.

thank you Mike.

i will make the changes and as soon as i finish the composition i will post it!!

thanks again.

hey!! i worked a little bit on this but i don't know!! somthing doesn't sound good can you give me your oppinion!!!

fascinating melody!!! it sounds similar to some fragments of ancient greek music i heard sometime ago. are you Greek?

the harmonization you did seems a bit confused, obscuring the beauty of the melody. such kind of tune could have its beauty enhanced by an accompaniment utterly contrastant to it, not much melodic, with other instruments, and maybe mainly rhythmic, or with very simple chording under the fluent upper voice. just a sugestion.

I like your Idea!! And yes i am From Greece. I just Come to US to Study Music Therapy!!!

Aprisiate your coment!!

ok u are welcome!

post your harmonisation here when finished! i would like to listen to it! cheers!

hi Iosif!

well . i liked very much the melody, so...... i made my own version. i know that you must have a very different conception about your tune, but if you like any idea or fregment in this harmonization please feel absolutely free to take it and/or transform it at will.

that's not i was indending to do at all. it is not my style. i though like the ending i amy use that part but i will harmonize it and post it here! it would be a lot differend than yours.

thanks though for harmonizing it. it sound cool!!!

I like it...very interesting! Good job!

- Jen