Tragic piano a-minor

Hi friends,
its lived played and recorded by me, so sorry for some technical mistakes
I havent transcribed it all yet, later I plan to remake it for piano and violin.
Its 4 minutes long, a-minor, piano solo:
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Looking forward for your comments.
Peter

I like the song, it's got good themes. I just wish you played with the theme that came a little after 3 minutes a little bit more. Most of your song is the same minor themes written in variations, which is great. I mean Beethoven did it with his 5th symphony pretty well, it's just I wish you did some more with that one part. It only lasted 20 seconds, and it was cool.

Thanks TheOmaster! I like to play with the variations of the theme but still let recognize the theme, I am happy that you like it. I think you mean specially the ending modulation to major chords in the 4th minute you liked most?

this is a very nice piece! i like the armonies and the pathos you created.
it is very good

Not necessarily that I liked it the most, but I thought you could do more with it. Because it did sound really cool, I just wanted to hear some more of it.

Thank you punkitititi!
to theOmaster: maybe I will add some further variation in major, but first I have to write the score until now :-)

I really like this piece!! I only downloaded the first minute, but I'm going to download the rest now . It's really sad(The first part). Love it!!

Thanks kurt_a_w!
I hope you will like the rest also! :-)

Hm...I like it . It's fairly simple in terms of chord progression, but I love the overall theme and feel of the piece. I love how it dissipates near 1:09, then builds back again with a heavier/lower left hand.

great transition at 1:34.

I don't like the hesitation before some of the end cadences of the melody, it takes away from the flow a bit. Also, I thought the ending was a bit weak. I would have liked to see it end in minor.

very romantic, heartwrenching stuff . Nice job!

I thought it was a solid piece with plenty of emotion but I have to agree with BiddyPocket:

I don't like the hesitation before some of the end cadences of the melody