Trio for Violin and Two Flutes

Hello all!

Here is something I wrote a little while ago upon request by my sister for some of her classmates. She requested a trio for a Violin and two Flutes (as the title goes).

I wanted to write this very classically, since my sister said that the idea came across when they were talking about Classical composers. That, and I didn't have much else for an idea. But anyway, I will start by saying that I did not deliberately rip any composer. I simply used some of the techniques I have heard in many pieces.

Here it is! Tell me what you think.

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... Any comments? Any at all? I really don't care if you tell me it sucks...

Your music sucks!!!!!!!


j/k.


No, it was quite enjoyable, I really enjoyed it.
It has a lot of energy to it. It looks really fun to play.
I can't find anything bad about it so... good job!

Thanks, Dead Chicken for commenting! Though I do hope SOMEONE can find something wrong with it.

Flute one, 6 bars from the end, third note should be Fsharp

Aha! Thank you rauta! I will correct that immediately.

very charming!

It's very energetic, but it sounds like children's music to me. (not in the sense that a child wrote it, but in the sense that it could be used for music in a child's movie or something.) I don't think that's bad lol, as you seemed to think in the shoutbox. I like it. It reminds me of a stylized carnival or something. XD
It sounds very classical-period inspired, like you said. You managed to mix classical and modern style in a way that gave you a nice piece.

Nice and simple, with gorgeous melodies. I definitely liked it.

In part E, the phrasing in the flutes seems a bit problematic...also, don't the flutists need to breathe?