Trumpet Suite D Major first movement.

Bah i realy need a composition break, hope you like it, I know is not realy good, i have a bad period now :9

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This was excellent. Really, I loved it except for the part where the trumpet goes really low, that was a little weak in my opinion. The other parts are simply brilliant. You could go a long way with this.

I thought that it was pretty good, but it was just a bit too diatonic for my taste. I like a little chromaticism in everything, though, and this seemed appropriate for the style. The harpsichord was well done, I thought, mainly because it didn't just maintain the same plinky style throughout--you changed it up.

I do think that this piece could use a little something else in it to add some oomph, if you know what I mean.

Thanks Mael

no spherenine, i dont know what you mean? please tell as for the chromaticism, well i could use some yes, but there is not so much chrom. in the baroque style so i dont feel it will fit the style, i rearly use chromat. thanks for your reply.

i feel very similar to mael. Excellent piece, the low part with the trumpet wasn't bad but it wasn't amazing, could use just a little tweak. this piece could go VERY FAR!!!!

Thanks yes i will do some more there are more movements comming