Valley of the Kings

This is my first time uploading something here, let's hope it works...

It starts off slowly, and is kind of monotonous for a little while, then about halfway through it picks up speed a bit. I wrote it using finale about a year ago, by the way.

Likey? No likey? Any and all suggestions are welcome.

This better work, wish me luck...

~Kal

I liked it. Very repeating-like.... but nonetheless. Good Job!

I think a more dramatic ending would be helpful you know to wrap up the song.

There was nothing i hated about it but there was nothing to make me think it was great. but thats ok i still found it rather good. dont really like the sudden drop of musical instuments thoughtout the song
like at 2:15.
Mabye you could add something to make the transition a little less Sudden.

Good sounding song. Just a few transition problems like mentioned above. The ending could use a little more finality, The ideas are good though.

Reminds me of music from Chex Quest (thought I doubt any of you will know what that was.)

I think that was very good! It definitely reminded me of eastern music, but with a touch of modern influence.

I meant to add an ending, but I never got around to it so I left it alone.

I wrote using Finale Notepad Plus, so I had to go online, find a midi file, delete all of the music, and write in my own...Also, I was only 14

I also meant for there to be a key change, but with Notepad, the only way to do a key change was to write in a bunch of accidentals.

~Kal

_Oh, thanks for replying...

My dad wrote a program for making music files when I was in 5th grade, but it was seriously flawed... it was confusing business, I'm glad I learned Finale Notepad and now FL Studio.

very nice and appealing song! nothing to criticise, i loved it!