Valley of the Many-Coloured Grass in E flat

It's actually a pretty interesting piece. I'll take my turn to gripe about the piano notation though, since you seem to have just more-or-less copy-pasted. With all the triplets, it would probably make more since to notate it in something like 12/8 and make the parts that are in straight eights into tuplets. The last chord in m.2 could be difficult to finger by a lot of players. The octave-down treble clefs (not sure about the technical term...) are never used in piano music. A bass clef would be perfectly acceptable. You can and should use 8va brackets at m.21, making it a lot easier to read.
I actually liked the music though, don't get me wrong.

nice to hear that you liked it! being appreciated at least by someone really matters to me.