Waltz #1 (rough draft)

i just wrote it please give me any feedbacks, be as mean as you can if necesary but please be reasonable not sumthing like "i hate you!!!"
THANKS YOU!

I like the underlying bass theme one two three, one two three ect, very well throughout piece like the transition in the mid to near end section, overall nice piece with no downers in this comment for it.

Hey there!

This was a really really enjoyable piece to listen to, I have to say! I didn't have any specific problems with it at all beyond the fact that I would like to see a more complex and longer version of it. This is a great piece of music for easy playing as is, but I'd encourage you to try and expand it into a nice concert performance version.

Otherwise not much to comment on, really, it was a cute theme and had a fairly cleverly-implemented, if standard, chord progression. Good work.

Keep posting!

reminiscent of Chopin.

I'm sorry, is that bad? I'll try to be more original next time, it's just when I follow the harmony rules, it turns out to sound like someone else's work. Just last night I got mad and tore one of my march into pieces. Is it okay to break harmony rules once in a while and invent something new (while still sound classical)?

While still sounding truly classical? Maybe.
Break the rules at your discretion, the rules are there to make things sound nice, and help to aviod ill-sounding errors, but if it sounds right to you, go ahead! Use them as guidelines, this is not an exam!

I like the modulation in bar 33, very well done.

The ending is too sudden, I think it could be slowed down or lenghtenend.

Keep up the good work!

Very very enjoyable tune. I really like the modulation and thought it was well done.

Thank you guys so much for the feedback
I was starting to get worred if my song is horribe because no one left any feedback for a while.
THANKS
as for right now I am still expanding this piece, I had to end there because that's what i had so far, and i didn't want to give u a unfinished feeling if i ended on a V or something
Soon the song would be finished and ill be playing it myself and i will upload it

I did like the joyous feeling it had. It reminded me of something that would be on a Super Mario Bros. Game, namely the dreamy Super Mario Bros 2. I like the old Video Game music since in the days before fancy sound cards, motifs, and melodies had to be simple but very clear and catchy for the game, especially on the technology.

The score is neatly written, a plus for performance (especially for amateur piano players like myself).