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Old Jun 1 2008, 1:30 AM

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We Can Run

What do you think
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Old Jun 3 2008, 10:15 AM

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Nice theme. Maybe you can change the part when the violin repeats chords, I think it sounds very repetitive.
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Old Jun 3 2008, 5:07 PM

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sigh, midi please

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Old Jun 3 2008, 10:56 PM

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It was pretty enjoyable.
My thoughts:
1. Violin 2 : notes below the G just below the staff are not really playable.
2. Are these solo violins or groups. If solo, then the violin 2 part's three note chords repeated that way are not going to sound like that, the sustained ones also will sound different. (Two notes at a time is the way to go most of the time )
3. If violin 3 is supposed to be a music box, name the staff accordingly. (less confusion).

just like papenco, variation would be nice.

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Old Jun 4 2008, 7:57 PM

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well here is my piano version
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