What do you think of this ?

Hey
I uploaded recently on my space a new composition way different from what I'm used to compose! An ex girlfriend once reproached me for not composing more rock scores... I decided to make one
What do you think about it ? Do you enjoy it ?
I think adding orchestral instruments was a good idea.

listen here : MySpace.com - JB - Paris, FR - Progressive / Classical / Grunge - www.myspace.com/dirtyjeanss

"sans titre 2"

thanks
JB

I liked the faster part near the end. At first I was like, "Agh, where did that come from?" but I ended up wishing the whole track had been that speed.

Aside from that I thought it felt a bit airy for a rock song, but it wasn't bad at all.

It's very clear you enjoy progressive rock. Good stuff, the editing sounded thin though, but musically speaking, it was fun.

"It's very clear you enjoy progressive rock"

oh no !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay I'm definitly not able to compose pop music lol

thanks to you both for your coments

I mean, I dont know your concept of rock (elvis or linkin park?? So broad...) but I definetely agress with DOFTS. This is progressive

My concept of rock? Hmmm I don't know I like a lot of different things in rock. I couldn't sum up. But you are right this song is progressive. I should have kept the first part, made a chorus and add a vox line, then it would have been more pop.
My ex-girlfriend won't like it but it doesn't matter ahah
thanks again, I'm glad you liked some parts of it