What Emotion?

hey Ron!!

YES!! This is what Ive wanted to hear from you. The slow somber stuff, and its beautiful.
I get this depressing, grasping at strings to hold on kind of feeling. Very somber and depressing.
The music it self its just really beautiful. I bet in a live performance, with a good interpretation, i would cry.
Excellent work here.

Scott.

(P.S I have a new choral piece up if you want to check it out.)

Scott

I went back and fixed the glaring mistakes in this and think it works much better now. Check it out if you get a chance.

Thanks

Ron

Originally Posted by rolifer

I went back and fixed the glaring mistakes in this and think it works much better now. Check it out if you get a chance.

Ron,

Unless my memory is letting me down, the changes are substantial. The new version is really good - more impact and a very nice flow. The way you have used stridency in a controlled way makes the piece work.

To me the mood has shifted a bit towards grief and despair with more intensity.

Now the piece cries out for more - it very much seems the first movement of something bigger.

Herb

Originally Posted by Euler

Ron,

Unless my memory is letting me down, the changes are substantial. The new version is really good - more impact and a very nice flow. The way you have used stridency in a controlled way makes the piece work.

To me the mood has shifted a bit towards grief and despair with more intensity.

Now the piece cries out for more - it very much seems the first movement of something bigger.

Herb

Herb

I have made a lot of changes in bthis since I first posted it and I agree that It should be made longer. I have another 4-6 minutes in my head that I will add once I get the chance.

Thanks as always

Ron

Very depressive music. It brings moods of sadness, agony, suffering, nostalgia(From the view of a character not that I feel nostalgia). About Death I don't get to visualize it, but someone near to die yes. Like someone going through a horrible moment where he/she is suffering a lot. That is what the piece brings to me also an old style black car! like from an old film.

Anyway, that is what I sense from this piece and the visuals I get from this.

My plan is to continue withy this piece and in the next section begin to bring some hope into the piece. Then It will either go back to the beginning and end or continue on in a lighter vein.

Thanks for commenting

Ron

Yeah, reminded me of the death scene from Carlito's Way a bit, and also Romeo and Juliet.

Chris

Thanks for the comment. I also feel that a death might be involved in this.

Ron