This is a WIIIIIIIERRRRRD Song right here

So, I just recently finished this song. Tell me what you think.

That really sounds like video game music to me. Hmm, I don't really know what to say to help you imporve, as it is in the experimetnal section.

that doesn't mean anything. Even if its expirimental, its still needy of improvement.

Okay....but I don't know how useful this is going to be.. because you might have been trying to create it like this... but:

The bass is the thing I noticed the most. Sometimes it seems like it is not hitting the right note... maybe keep it on the tonic of the chord not the third or the fifth. However, i liked the bagpipe effect - how it sounded echoing.

Thanks! Actually, the bass effect, was not intentional, I'll have to redo that.

But ya, the bagpipe actually is three bagpipes played one after another to make them sound like their echoing, technique taken by one of my inspirations, Bjorn Lynne.

haha this piece was fun! really a celebration.

I am also not sure if this comment will apply because this may be what you intended but...
The motive you had throughout the piece, while catchy, got a little tiring. Considering this piece sounds popish or like a video game as someone else mentioned, this could be the intention. Perhaps try changing the key that theme is in or switching the rhythm a bit. Another thing I thought might work is to add more ideas behind the motive instead of just a steady beat to give more groove to it.

Just small ideas. I thought it was very fun. I like it a lot!