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Old Jan 6 2006, 3:34 PM

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hey!!!! wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved at all your good will in taking my material to write an entirely new piece! absolutely delightful result!!! you have handled it very very finely and corrected the many irregularities in my added voice to match your own refined style, and that made the whole absolutely coherent and harmonious! super!!!! loved too the new instrumentation! wonderfully delicate! i feel very glad and greatly honoured indeed to have helped to create this litltle jewel!!!!! just perfect, i cannot stop listening to it!

if you wish we can make in the future other co-laborative works, just make me know. i would adore to!

best best regards Artisimo!
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Old Jan 6 2006, 6:22 PM

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Interesting! It works, but I must say I personally prefer the original with just the harpsichord. This new version's just as good, but I liked the simplicity of the earlier version; this new one just seems a little cluttered, I think. Good job, nonetheless.
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Old Jan 8 2006, 10:01 AM

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Charming and relaxing to the ear...when i closed my eyes i felt like i was by the country side breathing fresh air which i never get here in bangkok hehe.

Nice melody with good harmonization, thats what i like. good job
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Old Jan 19 2006, 2:06 AM

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what a delightful piece! thank you! =)
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Old Jan 19 2006, 7:39 PM

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Just being looking at the first file. As I've written elsewhere, I'm not a fan of the harpsichord so I hope you don't mind when I opened it in Finale and changed it to piano

It's a charming melody I think and very cantabile in style. Maybe you might think about adding a voice (soprano) line to it, I think it would really suit it.
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