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I know that this is an old thread and all, but I was hoping to get some feedback on my fugue. Anyone?
I am planning another this time with the e minor subject, but I would like to know how the c minor worked out first. Any feedback would be appreciated.
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This is Great! I appreciate the chord notation ‘cause it really let me get inside your head. It certainly helped me learn a thing or two should I ever attempt to seriously do one of these things myself. I don’t know if I’m qualified to enough to properly critique this in that I don’t know if I can execute one of these as well as you, but here are areas that I thought might be weak based on what
I think the ‘rules’ are.
Measure 22. The use of D natural in general. As much as I love the sound of Lydian, it’s not working to my ears here.
Measure 23 F- to F7 Is this legal? - Only half kidding. - It does sound a bit unorthodox to me.
Violin1. Parallel 5ths from M. 28 - 29
Oh yeah, I can’t find much in the way of retrograde, inversion, or augmentation. Am I just missing these?