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Well, I d/lded the file thinking "Yummy? Awesome?" Gawd, I disdain self-praise on this scale. So I went in jaundiced. But I admit I liked it - airy, flighty, swift...I loved the quiet pulse of the background. All in all very nice - nice length, everything. A bit short of awsome though. There was a loss of continuity somewhere around 18 secs. Did the pizz track drop out?
And a tiny bit of reverb would add space to the pizz. Just a personal view.
I will not name the time signature as I have some musical experience so let others have a go. The skewed triplets never deceived me. However, it could be in anything, depends how you tie over and group the notes.
Title - it's warm enough to be called Night-Flight or something to do with summer.
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Yep I think it is 6/8 too.
Well about the song, ehm Try to add more instr. and improve the dynamics!
But i like the staccato that comes in
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Hahahah! The only way to describe that song would be "funny". Technically chaos, but omg it's great haha I loved it.
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I'm glad you liked it. I wouldn't call it funny really. Good-humored, maybe. 'Technically chaos'? Nah.
To saiming: You're right, and so is paganini lover. Yay. This piece was conceived with woodwinds and brass, but it did not work, at all. The intimacy of strings is tasty all by itself. Dynamics, yes. Would be good. But volume envelopes and all that crap is not possible with the software I am using. Or maybe it is, but I just don't know how to do it. I will get it going, eventually.
To montpellier: Yeah, my self-image is not seriously so inflated. I was making a caricature of the pompous musicians I have known, in my own way. It's frustrating sometimes to endure them, but maybe their attitude has rubbed off on me too much. I do think the piece is yummy, though. Like a roasted garlic cream sauce, with a bit of leek and fennel. Not quite that yummy, actually. That's pretty high up there.
The track did not drop out. That was a place where I thought the accompaniment could carry the music by itself. It worked a lot better when it was being played on the computer than it does as an mp3. The space, the fullness, and the bass are diminished noticeably. I would try fiddling with the pan and all that, and I will when I inevitably extend or include this in something.
I'm glad you liked the piece, even being momentarily jaundiced.
It's true that this could be in any time signature, using ties. But that would reduce it to gibberish, on the page. One could say the same thing of any piece.
Night Flight could work, though the piece would benefit by some arpeggio-derived passages to bring out that idea, if I were to name it that.
Thanks, you guys, for your ideas.