There are many good things in this,
but I personally think there is too many sudden changes within this piece.
I can´t accuse this piece of being too repetitious. Instead it seems to be the other way around.
But maybe that is part of the experimentation.
A simple choral piece which I was commissioned to write for my school's choral teacher,by whom it was then performed. Unfortunately, I don't have the actual recording, so this is the computerized version. Let me know your thoughts!