A Day With A cold

This was a rather interesting composition for me. The static theme, cold theme, sure remind felt like the music was ill or sick. The ending was great. It sneeze! Such great humor. Harmonic wise it also has the melancholy blues feel. It is simple and easy. I like it.

Thanks, Aniolel. Glad you enjoyed it!!

This is a really bizarre piece -- it does feel cold in the sense that it's "empty", in a way, like being in a sterile hospital like environment. I "get" the piece, and it's just as well that it's just a short little thing, although in that time I was itching for the thirds at the beginning to break out into 6ths for some variation, for some reason. Not a big deal, either way, but it was like an itch I couldn't reach to scratch

Thanks for sharing, it'd make a good incidental theme for a TV show, or something to that effect

I liked the empty feeling. The way irritation grows as your nose is too full.
Also the recap in ms 13 was good. Same harmonies, with an added melody
I did not like the end. ms 19 and 20 could have been the end, but the resolution to Bb major sounded like there was more coming. The final cadence the way it is now just feels odd, and unfinished.