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Submitted: Dec 13 2011 06:09 PM
Last Updated: Dec 13 2011 06:09 PM
File Size: 2.4MB
Views: 862
Downloads: 72
Genre: Romanticism
Sub Genre: Modernism
Form: Canon

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The Beginning

2 Votes

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This is my first song i have ever written and i am open to any suggestions i would really like to know what you guys think of it. hope you guys enjoy

Beethovenbd

Dec 13 2011 06:21 PM

It is a very nice easygoing piece....soothing to the ear, it has a nice flow. At some times it begs for more melodic lines though, but that's just me.

keep up the good work

SnowThief

Jan 04 2012 03:46 PM

I love it, don't change a thing.

Austenite

Jan 04 2012 04:22 PM

Very interesting - the 'missing' melodic lines could be provided just by a voice and lyrics. Otherwise the piece holds by itself very well already.

mmmcitrus

Jan 15 2012 03:17 PM

I really enjoyed this composition, but the playing is a little clumsy at times without an even distribution of volume on notes, however this is a teeny tiny thing. I think it definitely has a melody, the lack of vocals doesnt take anything away form the loveliness of this.

Well Done