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  • Submitted: Dec 13 2011 06:09 PM
  • Last Updated: Dec 13 2011 06:09 PM
  • File Size: 2.4MB
  • Views: 862
  • Downloads: 72
  • Genre: Romanticism
  • Sub Genre: Modernism
  • Form: Canon

The Beginning

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This is my first song i have ever written and i am open to any suggestions i would really like to know what you guys think of it.  hope you guys enjoy



It is a very nice easygoing piece....soothing to the ear, it has a nice flow. At some times it begs for more melodic lines though, but that's just me.

keep up the good work :)
I love it, don't change a thing. :)
Very interesting - the 'missing' melodic lines could be provided just by a voice and lyrics. Otherwise the piece holds by itself very well already.
I really enjoyed this composition, but the playing is a little clumsy at times without an even distribution of volume on notes, however this is a teeny tiny thing. I think it definitely has a melody, the lack of vocals doesnt take anything away form the loveliness of this.

Well Done :)
I enjoyed the composition too! Pleasure to listen. Yes.
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