Under the Night Sky

It's a very sweet piece - but I'd say, if it's supposed to be played so calmly and softly, then it gets a bit too long. The changes in dynamics help the piece to get more interesting; I'd like you to use them more often. But you're off to a good start.

Thank you so much for the reviews, it really means alot. It's also really helpful for me since I'm practically a noob at composing. I will definitely take your advice

YOU'RE A NOOB?!!! This is better than anything I can write! I agree and disagree with Austenite, I don't think it's a bit too long, but you could do a bit more with dynamic contrast, some tempo contrast (ritards, accels, varying tempos, etc.) might also help to add to the piece, but wow, if this is your starting point, you don't need to worry about much. I love what you did with the harmony, with those slight dissonances and accidentals, it gives it that slight bit of mystery, and that along with your beautiful melody cannot be a better way to emulate the night. You have some great skill on these, especially in harmony, use it now and forever. Great job and keep 'em coming!

Thanks for the review! It really means a lot to me to know at least someone appreciates my music lol. I will definitely listen to your advice, thank you!