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  • Submitted: Jan 19 2012 03:26 PM
  • Last Updated: Jan 19 2012 03:26 PM
  • File Size: 1.41MB
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Tropical Paradise (1st Attempt)

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This is a mash up of various musical ideas that remind me of a tropical paradise. I'm not satisfied with any of the individual sections, and they really don't function together as a piece yet.

Feedback is, as always, deeply appreciated!



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Austenite
Jan 19 2012 08:58 PM
I think what you have here is enough thematic material, not for a single piece, but for at least two or perhaps three movements (the central section stands out as the better one in my opinion). But it all depends on the kind of piece you're attempting to compose, which I can't see clearly as of now. I'd like you to tell me if you have a clearly outlined goal of what to do with these themes.
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jsands
Jan 20 2012 01:28 PM
Honestly, I just wrote these when I was bored! I suppose that I want to make each theme work as part of a film score (the main theme with cues) but I really have no idea!
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