Reunion

wow! great job! I wish I had a score so I could give you a more in-depth analysis. But we don't have ears for nothing. The only problem I heard was probably that some lines seemed just too long. Mostly in the beginning, it feels as though it's moving too slowly. between 0:08 and 0:27, it feels like it needs something underneath that melody to keep it moving. Also, just a general rule that I think would help, the blacker the note, the more important it is. always true horizontally, vertically, it depends on if it's the melody. Hope this helps! the rest of it is really really good!

wow! great job! I wish I had a score so I could give you a more in-depth analysis. But we don't have ears for nothing. The only problem I heard was probably that some lines seemed just too long. Mostly in the beginning, it feels as though it's moving too slowly. between 0:08 and 0:27, it feels like it needs something underneath that melody to keep it moving. Also, just a general rule that I think would help, the blacker the note, the more important it is. always true horizontally, vertically, it depends on if it's the melody. Hope this helps! the rest of it is really really good!

Thanks for the response! I've uploaded the score now if you would like to see