Variation no 1

Ok, I have some things to say --

1) For playback, even if you have only midi, try to make the performance of the piece as close to your desired performance as possible. For example, I see here that the left hand in this minuet would make a more effective melody than the right hand, but you have it simply marked "p". Instead, try marking the R.H. stave "pp" and marking the L.H. "mf", or something like that, to achieve the desired volume. Also, feel free to use slurs to make it known to the performer how you want the piece to be phrased.

2) I don't really see why you freely show that the work is completely unfinished so far. You have only 14 measures here, of one theme ... it's not even a variation then, technically, until you make ... variations ...

3) Try to refrain from rating your own works, especially when they're not even finished! I know, it feels good when pieces get a good rating, and hey, if you honestly feel that a piece your wrote is worth 5 stars, your opinion as the composer does matter. (I've done it before myself.) But please tell me how you can objectively rate this 5 stars?

If you are having trouble finishing it, post it under Incomplete works. If not, finish it, then upload it, so others can give you better musical advice.

Someone else directed me to your principle theme, so I get that this first theme is not the principle theme, but a variation of that theme. Why didn't you put them both on the same post?

thanks, i dont khow how :S