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Empire- Okrol's Theme

Started by thatboy, Jun 06 2011 04:15 PM

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#1
thatboy

Posted 06 June 2011 - 04:15 PM

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Favorite Composers:Johann Pachelbel, John Williams, Howard Shore, James Horner
My Compositional Styles:Early 20th Century, Film Scores
Notation Software/Sequencers:Magix Music Maker, MuseScore
Instruments Played:Learning the piano

Hi, This is a the next track in the series from my 'Empire Overture', and is the theme of the main character to a book I'm writing. Once again, I made this a while back, but would love some feedback and support.


Name of Piece	MP3
Empire- Okrol's Theme

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SecondSelf

Posted 07 June 2011 - 04:08 PM

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Hi,

Beautiful work!

I would like to hear a more human touch to the music. Sounds a bit too mechanical... Add some dynamics and expression in the lines...

Watch your low register... sounds a bit muddy at times.

Hope this helps.

Enjoyed!

Ss

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thatboy

Posted 07 June 2011 - 04:39 PM

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Favorite Composers:Johann Pachelbel, John Williams, Howard Shore, James Horner
My Compositional Styles:Early 20th Century, Film Scores
Notation Software/Sequencers:Magix Music Maker, MuseScore
Instruments Played:Learning the piano

SecondSelf, on 07 June 2011 - 04:08 PM, said:

Hi,

Beautiful work!

I would like to hear a more human touch to the music. Sounds a bit too mechanical... Add some dynamics and expression in the lines...

Watch your low register... sounds a bit muddy at times.

Hope this helps.

Enjoyed!

Ss

Thank you, my friend. You're the first person to comment.
Yes your points are very applicable, however, my music is played using virtual instruments, and they're not the best, so it is hard for me to create a human sounding sound.

Thanks again for the review.
-Phil

Please check out my YouTube channel:
http://www.youtube.c...ic?feature=mhee

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WolfgangSachs

Posted 08 June 2011 - 04:13 PM

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Hi, Your work could be beautiful, but would even be more beautiful if there would be a score posted along to view the music heared

Kind regards W.S.

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#5
SecondSelf

Posted 08 June 2011 - 06:29 PM

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thatboy, on 07 June 2011 - 04:39 PM, said:

Thank you, my friend. You're the first person to comment.
Yes your points are very applicable, however, my music is played using virtual instruments, and they're not the best, so it is hard for me to create a human sounding sound.

Thanks again for the review.
-Phil

Hi Phil,

I understand the instrument problem... if there "would be" a score - I'd score it a 3.2 out 5 stars. Not bad at all!

Ss

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thatboy

Posted 09 June 2011 - 01:49 AM

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Favorite Composers:Johann Pachelbel, John Williams, Howard Shore, James Horner
My Compositional Styles:Early 20th Century, Film Scores
Notation Software/Sequencers:Magix Music Maker, MuseScore
Instruments Played:Learning the piano

SecondSelf, on 08 June 2011 - 06:29 PM, said:

Hi Phil,

I understand the instrument problem... if there "would be" a score - I'd score it a 3.2 out 5 stars. Not bad at all!

Ss

Thank you, my friend. I will have to start uploading scores too, thanks again for the kind words.
-Phil

Please check out my YouTube channel:
http://www.youtube.c...ic?feature=mhee

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thatboy

Posted 09 June 2011 - 01:50 AM

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Favorite Composers:Johann Pachelbel, John Williams, Howard Shore, James Horner
My Compositional Styles:Early 20th Century, Film Scores
Notation Software/Sequencers:Magix Music Maker, MuseScore
Instruments Played:Learning the piano

WolfgangSachs, on 08 June 2011 - 04:13 PM, said:

Hi,

Your work could be beautiful, but would even be more beautiful if there would be a score posted along to view the music heared <img src="http://network.youngcomposers.com/elgg/ipb/public/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif" alt="

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Kind regards

W.S.

Thank you friend.
I will have to start uploading scores

Please check out my YouTube channel:
http://www.youtube.c...ic?feature=mhee