sarahjoh

Наконец я нашёл то что искал! Хотя переходы немного корявые, так как большую часть времени трачу на ПАРТИТУРУ!, сэмплы для kontakt 4. temp85/104

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sarahjoh

It's very nice! But it would help if you upload the score and type the description in English! You have a logic way to build a piece, my english is not that good that I can explain that. It feels natural. The music from 1:22 until 2:00 is for me to long, try to have there more variation. The other parts are very cool! Thanks for uploading!

I would be glad to upload the scores but I have no idea how to write them down!

From what I hear there are three things going on in this piece, the section from the beginning to 1:22 then from that point up until 2:00 and then the remainder. You may have variations in every section but harmonically it is very bland and the whole piece can be boiled down to probably thirty seconds of material.

Harmonic variation is my main criticism, and structure of the piece is another. There is a very segmented feel to it, as you move to new ideas. If you're going to drastically change the feel of a piece it can help to hint at the change instead of abruptly switching.

thanks for the comments. yeah, changes are necessary only if they do not spoil the music, just so I do not like to pile extra music sounds. I'm just trying to make a "perfect" simple tune. That's it! I also do NOT like to redo!