Sorry, i didnt know contrabasson transpose an 8va lower. I've corrected this and also add a F dynamic. Im taking as a guide the harmonic's scale, doing larger gaps in the bass part, closer in the upper part. I would like to know if this is ok. Whata bout the clarinet in this attempt? Too far?? thanks!
hope you're aware the piccolo also transposes, right?
your chord is rather bottom-heavy and "pungent" because of it.
I would avoid the bassons in 3rds. If what you are loking for is that "harmonic series" effect, then the bassoons should not be a 3rd apart in that register.
The oboes are in their strongest most pungent register, while the two flutes are in a relatively weak range. The flutes will more than likely be overpowered by the strong reeds below them.