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I'd love to get your feedback. This is like a sweet lullaby, but with contemporary sounds and melody.

Written for hairspray bottle and scissors. Sorry for the pause in the middle, I had to move some stuff in the performance.

I've been trying to work this but I can't seem to figure out how to expand it. What do you guys think so far?

Love it. I feel it needs to repeat the beginning theme again later but a bit more developed.

Wow. I would say keep the percussion and the staccato brass going while maybe add in some low strings that are sustained? I love what you have so far, feels like one of those fights where you finally get to do battle with your rival. In my opinion, by keeping the percussion and brass hits going while adding something on top, will begin the slow climb to a build up...but that depends on where you want the track to go. Maybe switch up the percussion patterns a bit while adding in other percussion instruments?

This prelude was inspired by an autumn walk. Any kind of criticism is welcome! Prelude 1 Op.2.mp3

Hello, This is a piece I have been composing for the past couple of days. Any criticism is welcome, although I may not go back to work on the piece further, so I just thought I would leave it here. Cheers -R