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I just found this forum and feel that this community is quite friendly for sharing work. I would like to share my work and looking forward for some feedback. The Piano composition is titled: "Farewell", I am about to leave a City where I lived for15 years, and trying to elaborate the feelings through this piece. - Sorry for the recording quality (just using my phone) - There is a little bit off somewhere during the performing, but still hoping the audience can get the idea.

Well it's intense for sure. Technically I would bring the drums up level wise.. Playing is very well executed.. With just bass, guitar, drums, it's imperative that each 'player' is a virtuoso. Which you are. Let us hear, how great the drummer really is. I think it's the bass, sounds like you have the bass strings ringing out? Making for a mushiness.. Now this might be exactly what you intended, and 'death metal' lovers might totally love it too. You might go back to the guitar sound used at the beginning, too, your choice. Your guitar work is brilliant, and it's got a fuzzed gutsy sound, but it is very clear what it is playing. The Bass or low guitar strings ringing out creating discord of course is your decision as a composer/performer. Loved the ending.. You might consider putting a complete stop in the piece once or twice more.

I have decided to improve all my past composition but I have no idea what to do to this one now. This was the first composition I made on muse score.

Recorded and uploaded to my YouTube channel! https://youtu.be/PGmgM6JElcs

I was already in a band (14 years old).. I did get to see the Beatles live in 1966 in Boston. And I met and spoke to John Lennon for 90 seconds in a small restaurant in Boston in the mid 70's. Yes the Beatles were a profound impact on me.. And George Martin's use of orchestra and other instruments to widen the scope of their music, was the path I followed for many years.. Only in the last 8 years did I really begin to closely study how Beatles songs were created. And yes, Ringo's drumming, really changed with Revolver on. He left a lot of space for the brilliance of the rest of music. Beatles rarely ever had any 'wasted' notes in their music. Everything was there for some purpose. Amazing what these untrained musicians did. Of course, years of doing good covers, taught them all they needed to know. Keep up the great work, I will look out for your posts now.

Thanks musicianxx12 and Ilv!!! I Will publicate the score soon in my page at sheetmusicplus.