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  1. edfgi234

    Etude?

    Blimey it does sound like that a bit. Thanks for that Youngc.
  2. edfgi234

    Etude?

    Cheers Luis that's very kind of you. I'll have a think about whether to keep it this way then.
  3. This thing is a mess and what I want to ask is which ideas in this should I pursue, as most of this is just random ideas thrown together. I'd imagine this one needs some big changes (that's why I say it is incomplete, as some ideas just don't fit in my opinion), so any constructive criticism is appreciated very much.
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    Waltz no. 1

    I think this is the first piece/idea that I ever composed. I have changed it a little bit, but it is pretty much the same as it was when it was first composed (a long while ago). It is a very simple piece and may not be a waltz to be honest (some of it is in 4/4 time). Thought I'd upload it anyway to see what you guys think. I probably won't change it much in the future as I don't really compose good waltzes and haven't had much time at all recently and probably won't for a while. Feedback is appreciated of course. Cheers.
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    Passacaglia in C-sharp minor, Op. 1

    This is a lovely piece. It is very emotive. You should definitely be proud of it.
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    Nocturne

    Thank you again @Luis Hernández. It is great that you give such constructive/encouraging feedback.
  7. edfgi234

    Nocturne

    My fifth nocturne. Not too sure about some sections, like from measure 44. Of course let me know what you think and areas for improvements. Thanks.
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    Self-destruction Waltz

    I haven't heard this idea of music destruction before. Interesting piece, thanks for uploading.
  9. edfgi234

    Nocturne in E minor

    Cheers, but it is a bit less interesting than the other sections. I think it does need to be shortened as you said.
  10. edfgi234

    Nocturne in E minor

    Very good @Luis Hernández, thanks for the useful feedback. Interesting, just looked up phrygian mode and I did use it in this piece in a way with the f natural. I'll notate the slurs. I've done that before with the ending being too long, will shorten it. Thanks again.
  11. A fourth nocturne. This is the first time that I have tried to compose a dark piece. Not sure if it is decent or not. Feedback is of course appreciated thanks.
  12. Very nice. Reminds me of Star Trek in some parts, but it is unique. Is this live as it sounds pretty good?
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    Nocturne in G# minor

    I see what you mean. I agree with you, I'll try to correct that in this piece.
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    Nocturne in G# minor

    Your feedback on the pieces I have uploaded is always good to receive @Luis Hernández. Thanks for taking the time to comment. It is awesome that you like this piece. Yes I think that breaking the constant rhythm in a piece is something I need to sort out in all of my pieces.
  15. Sorry if I am uploading too many pieces at a time. Let me know if I should stop. I was thinking of a misty view when writing this. Hopefully that suits the piece. The main theme doesn't really change that much so that may be a problem that needs sorted, but I'm not sure.
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