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  1. Thanks very much @Guillem82 it's great to hearrange you like it. I never thought about it sounding that way but now that you mention it it does sound a bit anime. I just use Sibelius sounds for the audio. Not sure what VST it is.
  2. Just finished this piece recently. Any feedback is very much appreciated.
  3. Thanks for the feedback @Luis Hernández and @Ken320. I'll have to try that. I recently updated the piece to try and help it flow better. It still sounds like different pieces but I'll have to give that a try. Yes, also C major just feels like a tough key anyway.
  4. I have set myself a challenge of trying to compose 24 nocturnes all in different keys. This is the first one that I have attempted. I find it very hard to write in C major and as a result there are several key changes in this. Also, the piece seems to feel disjointed. If you have any ideas on how to improve this piece I would appreciate it greatly.
  5. Completed this piece recently. It is quite short so I'm not sure if it should be lengthened. Feedback is appreciated as always thanks.
  6. I'm not sure what this piece is (is it a rondo?). It is based off of a theme I thought of last year. Probably a fair bit could be improved. Any ideas? Thanks.
  7. I have had quite a lot of time over the past couple of days and tried to finish this piece. I'm not sure if this piece should be called a fantasy or part 2 to be honest. Feedback is appreciated. Thanks.
  8. Trying to write happier pieces as most of my stuff is depressing. Problem is I find it just sounds cheesy when I attempt it. This is one I finished today.
  9. Made a challenge of composing a piece per day a while ago. Unfortunately most sounded a bit crap. These are ones I think have ideas that might be worth doing more on. Do any of them have ideas that could be used? Also, which ones should just be forgotten about? If you do have a listen, thanks for taking the time.
  10. This piece was the inspiration for nocturne 2. It is meant to convey a depressing atmosphere. I'm sure there are several improvements. Feedback is appreciated.
  11. Blimey it does sound like that a bit. Thanks for that Youngc.
  12. Cheers Luis that's very kind of you. I'll have a think about whether to keep it this way then.
  13. This thing is a mess and what I want to ask is which ideas in this should I pursue, as most of this is just random ideas thrown together. I'd imagine this one needs some big changes (that's why I say it is incomplete, as some ideas just don't fit in my opinion), so any constructive criticism is appreciated very much.
  14. I think this is the first piece/idea that I ever composed. I have changed it a little bit, but it is pretty much the same as it was when it was first composed (a long while ago). It is a very simple piece and may not be a waltz to be honest (some of it is in 4/4 time). Thought I'd upload it anyway to see what you guys think. I probably won't change it much in the future as I don't really compose good waltzes and haven't had much time at all recently and probably won't for a while. Feedback is appreciated of course. Cheers.
  15. This is a lovely piece. It is very emotive. You should definitely be proud of it.
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