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MusicianXX12

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  1. I would like to hear a more pianistic texture, as well as more variety with a progressive approach in the left hand accompaniment. Thanks!
  2. A little duo for Violin and Piano
  3. Nice music and instrumentation. Not sure about the specifics of its Balkan gypsy style. Sounds rather Eastern Mediterranean. Which doesn’t diminish the music’s quality! Nice! A better strings library would have greatly improved the sound.
  4. A serious professional piece, great performed. I would like to hear the continuation!
  5. My contribution is the "Allegro moderato".Allegro moderato.mp3
  6. Nice piece, employing contemporary technics of composing and containing a narrative aspect! Congratulation!
  7. Maarten, Wow! So nice of you! Thanks a lot!
  8. Luis, thanks for your analysis and suggestions!
  9. Short piece for three woodwinds.
  10. Nice, yet short. I would like to hear the continuation. The left hand chords are continuously spanning more than octave, that might pose a technical obstacle to many performers.
  11. An interesting piece, with a feel of form structure. I would like to get the notation, please.
  12. "If you volunteer to be a judge, you may not enter as a contest participant". - Yes, I am interested in this kind of volunteering. Thanks!
  13. Simple and touching! Some more thematic development would add more interest, but that's a matter of taste...
  14. Pretty nice! I would like to hear an orchestrated version of it, either!
  15. Wow! So good! Right evocation, well formed, quite contemporary! Just use a better sounds library!
  16. Nice working version, nice ethnic feel.I would like to hear the final version with good library sounds, or even live!
  17. Nice tune and nice arrangement. My general thought would be starting consonant and progressively moving to a more dissonant surprising harmony with each stanza. Variation in texture would be a possibility. In order to expand the piece, I would think of repeating some verbal lines, the inclusion of more elaborated non-repeating piano interludes and adding a little coda at the end. Good luck! Keep sharing, please!
  18. I totally agree with you on the “bass configuration” before exposing the first theme, though I would make it a bit longer. The theme starting in m51 isn’t terribly contrasting – the same mood, the same tonality, almost the same tempo, and, first of all, the same, or almost the same, arpeggiated figures in the left hand. Even without creating a new rhythmic intro to the second theme, just by changing the pattern of the left hand accompaniment, the theme would get a much better stand out, IMHO. Thanks for allowing to discuss your music. The texture, harmony and voice leading is a separate topic. Again, I like your music for expressing a certain mood.
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