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  1. edfgi234

    Nocturne no. 6

    This piece was the inspiration for nocturne 2. It is meant to convey a depressing atmosphere. I'm sure there are several improvements. Feedback is appreciated.
  2. This thing is a mess and what I want to ask is which ideas in this should I pursue, as most of this is just random ideas thrown together. I'd imagine this one needs some big changes (that's why I say it is incomplete, as some ideas just don't fit in my opinion), so any constructive criticism is appreciated very much.
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    Etude?

    Blimey it does sound like that a bit. Thanks for that Youngc.
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    Etude?

    Cheers Luis that's very kind of you. I'll have a think about whether to keep it this way then.
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    Waltz no. 1

    I think this is the first piece/idea that I ever composed. I have changed it a little bit, but it is pretty much the same as it was when it was first composed (a long while ago). It is a very simple piece and may not be a waltz to be honest (some of it is in 4/4 time). Thought I'd upload it anyway to see what you guys think. I probably won't change it much in the future as I don't really compose good waltzes and haven't had much time at all recently and probably won't for a while. Feedback is appreciated of course. Cheers.
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    Nocturne

    My fifth nocturne. Not too sure about some sections, like from measure 44. Of course let me know what you think and areas for improvements. Thanks.
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    Passacaglia in C-sharp minor, Op. 1

    This is a lovely piece. It is very emotive. You should definitely be proud of it.
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    Nocturne

    Thank you again @Luis Hernández. It is great that you give such constructive/encouraging feedback.
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    Self-destruction Waltz

    I haven't heard this idea of music destruction before. Interesting piece, thanks for uploading.
  10. A fourth nocturne. This is the first time that I have tried to compose a dark piece. Not sure if it is decent or not. Feedback is of course appreciated thanks.
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    Nocturne in E minor

    Cheers, but it is a bit less interesting than the other sections. I think it does need to be shortened as you said.
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    Nocturne in E minor

    Very good @Luis Hernández, thanks for the useful feedback. Interesting, just looked up phrygian mode and I did use it in this piece in a way with the f natural. I'll notate the slurs. I've done that before with the ending being too long, will shorten it. Thanks again.
  13. Sorry if I am uploading too many pieces at a time. Let me know if I should stop. I was thinking of a misty view when writing this. Hopefully that suits the piece. The main theme doesn't really change that much so that may be a problem that needs sorted, but I'm not sure.
  14. Very nice. Reminds me of Star Trek in some parts, but it is unique. Is this live as it sounds pretty good?
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    Nocturne in G# minor

    I see what you mean. I agree with you, I'll try to correct that in this piece.
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    Nocturne in G# minor

    Your feedback on the pieces I have uploaded is always good to receive @Luis Hernández. Thanks for taking the time to comment. It is awesome that you like this piece. Yes I think that breaking the constant rhythm in a piece is something I need to sort out in all of my pieces.
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    SUMMER 2018: COMPETITION ANNOUNCEMENT

    I'll give it a try. Can it be just one instrument (piano), as I have not tried composing with more than one instrument present? Or would it be worth trying with several instruments?
  18. I don't think this is really a nocturne, but I composed it with the night in mind. It doesn't really flow that well in my opinion, but not really sure how to fix that. Please do let me know where to improve, as I do think this piece does need to be changed.
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    Nocturne in Eb major

    Yes it felt like the piece was separated into sections somewhat when I was writing it. Thanks very much @Luis Hernández it is good to hear you liked it.
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    Nocturne in Eb major

    I get what you mean. I should make sure to bring back the main theme, section A, before the piece ends. Also try to use a mix of both triplets and normal in the return of the theme. Fair play the first example was good, the second was crazy. Cheers for the feedback, I will incorporate it into the piece.
  21. I have composed a few nocturnes. This is my first one. It is very simple. Any advice for how to improve is of course appreciated.
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    Nocturne in E major

    Okay, I have tried to update this piece based on the advice given. Please do let me know if this is a step in the right/wrong direction. Your feedback was very constructive, so thanks for that.
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    Nocturne in E major

    That is very helpful feedback. It is good to get such useful advice. Thank you both, I will apply this advice to the piece.
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    Lily

    I don't know about music theory, so I can only say if it sounds good. I can say that this is definitely a very interesting sonata and enjoyable to listen to in my opinion.
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    3 Preludes

    Thanks @Willibald for the feedback and areas for improvement. And thanks @Osbuurn, its good to hear that the pieces gave you some motivation.
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