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edfgi234

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  1. Thanks for the feedback @Luis Hernández and @Ken320. I'll have to try that. I recently updated the piece to try and help it flow better. It still sounds like different pieces but I'll have to give that a try. Yes, also C major just feels like a tough key anyway.
  2. I have set myself a challenge of trying to compose 24 nocturnes all in different keys. This is the first one that I have attempted. I find it very hard to write in C major and as a result there are several key changes in this. Also, the piece seems to feel disjointed. If you have any ideas on how to improve this piece I would appreciate it greatly.
  3. Completed this piece recently. It is quite short so I'm not sure if it should be lengthened. Feedback is appreciated as always thanks.
  4. I'm not sure what this piece is (is it a rondo?). It is based off of a theme I thought of last year. Probably a fair bit could be improved. Any ideas? Thanks.
  5. I have had quite a lot of time over the past couple of days and tried to finish this piece. I'm not sure if this piece should be called a fantasy or part 2 to be honest. Feedback is appreciated. Thanks.
  6. Trying to write happier pieces as most of my stuff is depressing. Problem is I find it just sounds cheesy when I attempt it. This is one I finished today.
  7. Made a challenge of composing a piece per day a while ago. Unfortunately most sounded a bit crap. These are ones I think have ideas that might be worth doing more on. Do any of them have ideas that could be used? Also, which ones should just be forgotten about? If you do have a listen, thanks for taking the time.
  8. This piece was the inspiration for nocturne 2. It is meant to convey a depressing atmosphere. I'm sure there are several improvements. Feedback is appreciated.
  9. Blimey it does sound like that a bit. Thanks for that Youngc.
  10. Cheers Luis that's very kind of you. I'll have a think about whether to keep it this way then.
  11. This thing is a mess and what I want to ask is which ideas in this should I pursue, as most of this is just random ideas thrown together. I'd imagine this one needs some big changes (that's why I say it is incomplete, as some ideas just don't fit in my opinion), so any constructive criticism is appreciated very much.
  12. I think this is the first piece/idea that I ever composed. I have changed it a little bit, but it is pretty much the same as it was when it was first composed (a long while ago). It is a very simple piece and may not be a waltz to be honest (some of it is in 4/4 time). Thought I'd upload it anyway to see what you guys think. I probably won't change it much in the future as I don't really compose good waltzes and haven't had much time at all recently and probably won't for a while. Feedback is appreciated of course. Cheers.
  13. This is a lovely piece. It is very emotive. You should definitely be proud of it.
  14. Thank you again @Luis Hernández. It is great that you give such constructive/encouraging feedback.
  15. My fifth nocturne. Not too sure about some sections, like from measure 44. Of course let me know what you think and areas for improvements. Thanks.
  16. I haven't heard this idea of music destruction before. Interesting piece, thanks for uploading.
  17. Cheers, but it is a bit less interesting than the other sections. I think it does need to be shortened as you said.
  18. Very good @Luis Hernández, thanks for the useful feedback. Interesting, just looked up phrygian mode and I did use it in this piece in a way with the f natural. I'll notate the slurs. I've done that before with the ending being too long, will shorten it. Thanks again.
  19. A fourth nocturne. This is the first time that I have tried to compose a dark piece. Not sure if it is decent or not. Feedback is of course appreciated thanks.
  20. Very nice. Reminds me of Star Trek in some parts, but it is unique. Is this live as it sounds pretty good?
  21. I see what you mean. I agree with you, I'll try to correct that in this piece.
  22. Your feedback on the pieces I have uploaded is always good to receive @Luis Hernández. Thanks for taking the time to comment. It is awesome that you like this piece. Yes I think that breaking the constant rhythm in a piece is something I need to sort out in all of my pieces.
  23. Sorry if I am uploading too many pieces at a time. Let me know if I should stop. I was thinking of a misty view when writing this. Hopefully that suits the piece. The main theme doesn't really change that much so that may be a problem that needs sorted, but I'm not sure.
  24. I'll give it a try. Can it be just one instrument (piano), as I have not tried composing with more than one instrument present? Or would it be worth trying with several instruments?
  25. Yes it felt like the piece was separated into sections somewhat when I was writing it. Thanks very much @Luis Hernández it is good to hear you liked it.
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