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It no longer matters as I chose to change the expression, I have replaced it with: "Grave; delicato e lacrimoso" would this be considered correct..?

 

yes, now there's no contradiction, but that sounds very sad, is it very sad ? "Very slow, delicate and weeping" ?  :(  if that's what you want then is ok. :thumbsup:

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yes, now there's no contradiction, but that sounds very sad, is it very sad ? "Very slow, delicate and weeping" ?  :(  if that's what you want then is ok. :thumbsup:

Well, yes- when I wrote the poem I wanted to go for something passionate yet almost sorrowful, tearful- as the opening text is 'I reach for her, I reach for her; words but and echo, birds yet to sound' and it feels right to have that specific direction :D

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