retroboy87 Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 https://soundcloud.com/retroboy87/circus https://soundcloud.com/retroboy87/circus- Hello everyone. I'm an amatuer composer with not much experience composing, but I do know a lot of music theory. Which version of this song do you think sounds better? I challenge you to do a Roman Numeral analysis of this song. Feel free to leave any feedback on this song or any of my other songs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
U238 Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 First link doesn't work. The second link sounds pretty monotone. You try to insert interest with novel harmonies but you ignore the accompaniment, the same rhythmic figure pounds out the lower voice the whole piece. Sounds like improv, there are a handful of ideas with little to no development. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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