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Moonlight by the riverside

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Old works, revised.

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Hi

In several parts it sounds like an harp (or its equivalent in eastern music). I like your work in the highest notes. Sometimes it sounds "chinese", other times not so much. I think it colud depend on using the pentatonic scale or not. Anyway, interesting. i always like alternative harmonies.

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it is hard to stick with pentatonic, so I try to use rhythm and ornaments to do the work. but still long way to hone my skills

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I'm with Luis for most of what I thought. Some of the left hand inversions maybe could have been spaced out a little more to avoid it sounding murky, but this was pretty rare. Overall, nice work

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