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My first orchestral piece finally done! Opus 12 is written for modified orchestral ensemble consisting of :

Piano,

Woodwinds : flute, oboe, A clarinet

Brass : French horn

Percussion instruments : glockenspiel, vibraphone, tubular bells, triangle

Strings : violins 1, violins 2, violas, violoncellos and contrabasses.

and harp.

Composition consists of first part (moderato - E major/C sharp minor), second part (F major/D minor) and third part - modified first part.

Since I'm a complete amateur high school student, any helpful hints and comments are very welcomed! Score in PDF format coming soon.

For more music please visit : https://www.reverbnation.com/mademoisellelilaclucrezia

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So firstly, my apologies, I'm not trying to berate you or anything, but I couldn't get a sense of direction from the piece.
For example, the D minor section, it too frequently changes texture from polyphonic to homophonic and the dynamics seem like spikes to me.

2nd example, the very ending with the two mixing melodies I think could have had a lot more emotion with the 5th and a lower tonic to drive the minor-ness of the piece home.

Maybe it's the audio quality or something, but it sounded like a bunch of ideas, with not much growing or expanded upon. Perhaps it will be better with a score.

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Thank you and much appreciate your comment. I doubt it's the audio quality, since I also think the problem lies in the quality of the piece. Thanks again!

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