Denatura Sonorum Posted September 10, 2016 Share Posted September 10, 2016 (edited) A prelude. Edited February 3, 2017 by Denatura Sonorum MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu O dragão de três corcovas > next 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted September 10, 2016 Share Posted September 10, 2016 This was pleasant. Good on you for keeping the motif repeating throughout the movement. I was hoping for a little bit more of a moving line, but for what's here, it's pretty well done. I like your chords (you use M7th chord inversions pretty well) with the exception of the last one, where instead of having an E9, you have an Emadd2, which is kind of an uncertain way to end the piece. Maybe that's what you wanted, but it's kind of uncharacteristic to the rest of it. Pretty good work here! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted September 10, 2016 Share Posted September 10, 2016 Nice piece. It's evocative, whichi is what I "ask" for a piece of music. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denatura Sonorum Posted September 11, 2016 Author Share Posted September 11, 2016 Thank you very much, Luis Hernández and Monarcheon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishyfry Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 Really nice. Calm and atmospheric for the most part. Personally, I don't mind the add2 chord as an ending, although it's not impossible that an E9 would be better. But the answer is up to whatever your vision is as the composer. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denatura Sonorum Posted September 13, 2016 Author Share Posted September 13, 2016 Thank you very much, fishyfry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denatura Sonorum Posted February 3, 2017 Author Share Posted February 3, 2017 Hi. I've just uploaded a better rendition of the piece. Um abraço. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bassoongirl123 Posted February 9, 2017 Share Posted February 9, 2017 Very nice. I like the melody and harmonies, as well as the overall feel of the piece. I think more dynamics would be nice. I feel like this is more of background music--something I would listen to while working on something else rather than going to a concert to listen to. Again, great job, it was very beautiful Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denatura Sonorum Posted February 9, 2017 Author Share Posted February 9, 2017 Thank you, very much, bassoongirl123, for listen and comment. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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