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A prelude.

Edited by Denatura Sonorum
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This was pleasant. Good on you for keeping the motif repeating throughout the movement. I was hoping for a little bit more of a moving line, but for what's here, it's pretty well done. I like your chords (you use M7th chord inversions pretty well) with the exception of the last one, where instead of having an E9, you have an Emadd2, which is kind of an uncertain way to end the piece. Maybe that's what you wanted, but it's kind of uncharacteristic to the rest of it.

Pretty good work here!

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Really nice. Calm and atmospheric for the most part. Personally, I don't mind the add2 chord as an ending, although it's not impossible that an E9 would be better. But the answer is up to whatever your vision is as the composer. 

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Very nice. I like the melody and harmonies, as well as the overall feel of the piece. I think more dynamics would be nice. I feel like this is more of background music--something I would listen to while working on something else rather than going to a concert to listen to. Again, great job, it was very beautiful

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