jtschweitzer Posted October 28, 2016 Share Posted October 28, 2016 here is a piece for two violins and one cello. thoughts, feedback, and ideas welcome. trio_no._1.mid PDF trio_no._1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted October 28, 2016 Share Posted October 28, 2016 I had to hear this in my head rather than the file given my circumstances at the moment, but chordally it sounds okay, theoretically. The way you structure the chords make it sound a little weak harmonically. The writing in the beginning is also weird... are whole notes not an option? If you want them portando, you have to mark it. It seems like a more tonal Scelsi. It's interesting. Nicely done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted October 28, 2016 Share Posted October 28, 2016 Hi Well, I could listen to it (midi sounds). What I have to say is that, apart from the midi sound which is not very nice, the whole piece is in "tremolando". That's too much. I don't know if you wanted to be so, or not. I think you didn't because from m. 25 on, there are some tremolo written. When a piece is static, or in that kind of sections, I'm not very fond of exact repetitions, there's always occasion to make variations, but that's your choice, of course. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jtschweitzer Posted October 29, 2016 Author Share Posted October 29, 2016 Thank you for the critiques, gentlemen. I'm going to continue working on it, your feedback is appreciated! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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