Bogus Posted November 3, 2016 Share Posted November 3, 2016 This was a piece I wrote a few months back. I was experimenting with writing in a major key, since most of my works have been minor. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Waterfallfull > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted November 4, 2016 Share Posted November 4, 2016 I know what it's like to write mostly minor pieces... that was me for a while, haha. The dissonances you introduce in the first part are quite beautiful, I just wished more of them resolved, because after holding them a bit, they sound awkward. The second Allegro section I was wondering where the percussion went... that took away a lot of the driving force, and more importantly, the suspense of out of it. I felt like a high point and low part could really increase the emotions in here. Also, maybe a few more deviations from the tonic chord? It carried itself very well in the beginning, and unfortunately my expectations were a little bit let down in the second. For a first in major piece I think you knew what you were doing... just fool around with instrumentation a bit more. Cheers! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bogus Posted November 4, 2016 Author Share Posted November 4, 2016 Thanks for the feedback! I will keep all that in mind as I work on it a little more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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