cloud10000 Posted November 14, 2016 Share Posted November 14, 2016 (edited) hello everyone, i m back with my new piece, just listen to it, appreciate it and comment on it. Edited November 14, 2016 by cloud10000 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Op100 Staccato > next PDF Op100 score Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnbucket Posted November 14, 2016 Share Posted November 14, 2016 The 'staccato' sections are too similar to Chopin's op. 25 no. 4(? It's been a while). I sincerely think that your time would be better spent writing shorter, more well-thought-out pieces than what you have here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted November 14, 2016 Share Posted November 14, 2016 I mostly agree with johnbucket. It's far too sectionalized and needs more structural and occasionally harmonic development. Nothing wrong with a collection of ideas but it doesn't seem as coherent here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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