Jump to content

Recommended Posts

  • 4 weeks later...

Not bad. If anything, I would suggest you try to use suspense a little more; things in your suite are currently very set in stone, and you have the infinite option to do so much more than that. Sure, some of them are good just being stagnant, but if we want to scare people, let's really scare them!
Alone In The Dark struck me as the strangest because it offers very little in terms of new material. The others did a pretty good job in keeping away from genercism, but this one felt like a retraction. Because there aren't many proper tones, I can't critique that, but your atmospheres are generally okay.

 

Link to post
Share on other sites

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.

Guest
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.

×
×
  • Create New...