Bleum Posted November 28, 2016 Share Posted November 28, 2016 Hello :) Please listen to this demo;;; i'd appreciate all feedback. [this is in draft form] beats, -bleum Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted November 28, 2016 Share Posted November 28, 2016 More chord variation is one thing, but the ostinato rhythm continues without change for, I think, way too long. The singers are out of tune, both sharp and flat depending on the note. It just sounds so unassuming; I want to hear more happen. I want to feel emotion, rather than be complacent. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleum Posted November 29, 2016 Author Share Posted November 29, 2016 Thanks for your valuable feedback. im going to take each part into consideration and see how I can improve it. is there anything about the piece that you liked? -bleum. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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