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Hello everyone!

I am fairly new to this forum and was very excited to find it! This is a piece I'm working on for a project that is about a dream world filled with nightmares. Im not sure where or if it will fit but any feedback would be much appreciated.

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Not every chord has to be a seventh chord you know; with something like this a jarring image of calm vs. complex would be nice, but it's too static here in my opinion. I also don't really get the feeling of encountering nightmares. You set up a dreamscape, admittedly, quite admirably, but I don't get that second layer to it. Possibly adding really electronic sounds to counter it would add to that effect. That's just a suggestion, I just want to feel more uncomfortable. 

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I can hear the dream aspect though as Monarcheon mentioned it is a little difficult to determine where the Nightmare portion comes in. 

I hear the part where the tension is steadily building which leads into the vocals towards the end but it ends abruptly (Which is a current issue I have actually haha.)

Overall, if this was more developed it has the potential to be something epic.

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