vp4VP Posted December 11, 2016 Share Posted December 11, 2016 I wrote this yesterday and did some minor editing and mixing today. Looking to use this in a game Desert type area. Any feedback and suggestions welcomed. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Desert > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted December 11, 2016 Share Posted December 11, 2016 Your tonal modulations are quite nice. However, your atmosphere changes are quite sudden sometimes, especially going back to something softer. I would also add another motif to work with. The main scale one gets a bit tiresome to me, and elongating it with multiple things can lead to a section with overlap later. Parallel fourths also seemed out of place here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vp4VP Posted December 12, 2016 Author Share Posted December 12, 2016 Thanks Monarcheon, I have to go back and edit some parallels. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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