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A small thing I did while studying for my exams. This is my second composition written for orchestra (modified orchestral ensemble). The mixing is terrible, I know. It was really random and all crazy, so please forgive me... Thank you for listening and wish all of you a nice, peaceful, warm New Year filled with creativity, brilliant ideas, and wonderful music!

 

 

 

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Rarely does something build on itself in this piece, until the end. Near the end was nice, especially around the first E major section, and beyond that. You seem to have a compulsion to cut into a new idea in the beginning portions perhaps a little bit too often. 
Your borrowed iii chords were implemented quite well, and I like how only some of them led to modulations, very clever writing.
You did this a little more near the end (it was still largely homophonic), but if you're to improve this, see if you can add some polyphony! Then, the transitions from different sub-sections will seem a lot smoother!

Cheers!

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5 hours ago, Monarcheon said:


Your borrowed iii chords were implemented quite well, and I like how only some of them led to modulations, very clever writing.
You did this a little more near the end (it was still largely homophonic), but if you're to improve this, see if you can add some polyphony! Then, the transitions from different sub-sections will seem a lot smoother!

Cheers!

 

The transition could be a little smoother, I agree. Thank you for listening and a helpful comment!

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On 30.12.2016 at 5:04 AM, Dchrisanthako said:

It reminded me of "Scissorhands" movie! :)

Loved the instrumentation, could use a little more of a stable melody, like a memorable "tune" to make it stand out. 

Happy new year!

 

Thank you! Also wish you a happy new year. 

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