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this is the piece I newly composed, hope everyone like it.

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Measure 39 should probably be written as crossed-hands

Measure 52: Instead of the half notes, maybe use the 1e, 3e rhythm to be economic for your transition? Especially since there aren't half notes like that prior in the piece.

Measure 74, the octave "A" in the bass is tricky and isn't necessary

Some of your harmonies in your left hands are going to be real muddy so be careful

 

Really good piece! I look forward to hearing more!!!

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This is a lovely piece.  For once, the left hand is very well written, possibly exceeding the right in places.  I did find some of the developments to be a little simplistic, that is very probably your goal here, but for me I would have liked a little more by way of ornamenting the developments differently from each other, but I like the piece very much.

I think many of us suffer from the same problem, in that a midi performance does a lot to detract from the nuances that a live performance would give.

Best regards

Mark

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