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Would like feedback on new piece "Mortalis Divinitus"


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Hello! So I've been playing around with a music program I've got and I came up with this piece of music. I used a written score I had earlier and then orchestrated it all with MIDI. However, I'm having trouble finding the document, though I did upload the music onto Youtube. I would love to hear feedback; Personally, (and in retrospect)  this piece seems to be quite repetitive at parts, and I think that I will definitely be changing that. Anyway, here it is:

 

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Mixing and synching is really uneven; a lot of things don't line up at all. Though maybe you wanted it that way? I don't know.
It's a bit repetitive, but my main problem is that you stop between almost every section... have some things flow more, you know? It's a bit disconcerting having something built up only to fall before the climax so much it becomes a pattern. 
The melody is good. It's not so much repetitive as it is in desperate need of development. Go for it! It's a good start!

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