Jump to content
Kickstarter Project for Music Jotter begins May 10th. Write music on the web or desktop computer.
Has Midi Scrubbing & Easy Tuplet Entry.
Get BIG discount as a Kickstarter supporter. No monthly subscription fees. Follow the campaign today!

Sound of Queanbeyan


Recommended Posts

Since moving to Queanbeyan, I've enjoyed the nature surrounding there. This was made from the impression I've got there.

MP3
0:00
0:00
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Kickstarter Project for Music Jotter begins May 10th. Write music on the web or desktop computer.
Has Midi Scrubbing & Easy Tuplet Entry.
Get BIG discount as a Kickstarter supporter. No monthly subscription fees. Follow the campaign today!

Some problems with counterpoints, specifically passing tones in the bass. They make the melody seem atonal when it's not.
The section with an A minor bass and something modal in the soprano (tonic E or B) I can tell is supposed to be a contrast. Maybe even a low point. But other than the notes, I wasn't really given a big impression on that. Dynamics or tempo can really bring that out.
You have some classically sparse textures which is nice, but it's a bit too consistent, in my opinion. Perhaps making some variation in that can make this feel more like a progression through scenes, etc.
Good work so far, cheers!

Link to comment
Share on other sites

21 hours ago, Monarcheon said:

>Some problems with counterpoints, specifically passing tones in the bass. They make the melody seem atonal when it's not.
 

Thank you for your comment. Did you mention the section written in E minor? Surely the bass and soprano are playing independently in that section. Although I've tried to follow the manner of a symphony written by Mozart, the counterpoint is hard for me..

 

 

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.

Guest
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.

 Share

×
×
  • Create New...