Martim Manuel Posted March 1, 2017 Share Posted March 1, 2017 Hello, This is my lattest piano work, composed in january. I wanted write an animated piece, inspired by popular music of Portugal, so it is very tonal probably one of the most tonal pieces I made. I would apreciate very much your feedback and I apologise for the lack of dynamics Thank you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted March 1, 2017 Share Posted March 1, 2017 Pleasant. 1. I would make your modulation back to F# a little more clear. 2. In the second measure of every main phrase, the pseudo-chromaticism is off-putting, since the process begins as such, but becomes diatonic by the end of the bar, normally it's the other way around (tip to make something not chromatic sound chromatic), but I can kind of see the V - I approach. Maybe look into it. It's overall quite good. Pop songs aren't this short though. :) 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted March 24, 2017 Share Posted March 24, 2017 I find it quite funny and nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maarten Bauer Posted March 25, 2017 Share Posted March 25, 2017 Very playful! I liked it. Maybe try to develop the theme(s) more and lengthen the piece qua duration. For me the piece does not sound finished. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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