selcukozer001 Posted March 19, 2017 Share Posted March 19, 2017 Hello Friends, I'd like to share the composition that I finished today. So it is very fresh :) I am looking forward to receiving your feedbacks. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu A rose in winter > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted March 20, 2017 Share Posted March 20, 2017 Sometimes your harmonic language is really strange, like when you add diminished fifths to go to a bvii chord but never actually deliver on it or transition in/out of it properly. Combine this with awkward cadences (I think I heard one that cut to Eb for some reason) and it's a little too dense for me to really hear what's going on or your intentions of the piece. It flows nicely through these, though, which is good! It's just kind of weird how it does it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken320 Posted March 21, 2017 Share Posted March 21, 2017 Musical non-sequiturs Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selcukozer001 Posted April 9, 2017 Author Share Posted April 9, 2017 On 21.03.2017 at 0:50 AM, Monarcheon said: Sometimes your harmonic language is really strange, like when you add diminished fifths to go to a bvii chord but never actually deliver on it or transition in/out of it properly. Combine this with awkward cadences (I think I heard one that cut to Eb for some reason) and it's a little too dense for me to really hear what's going on or your intentions of the piece. It flows nicely through these, though, which is good! It's just kind of weird how it does it. Hi @Monarcheon, Thanks for your comments :) It was an experimentation for me to use quite different harmonic patterns in sequence. I agree with your comments on cadences. Maybe next time I should try softer transitions while keeping the variety of the patterns. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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